THE RETURN!- The Sloppy Seond- A New Season

[annabelle]

On second thought: You've based your show off of Sean Avery, so really, how credible/interesting can we expect it to actually be.

[Deleted]

Are you PMS'ing?

anyone on you first post thanks for the "constructive critisism" i'll try and make the next one more suprising and try not to say "no" as much

[Detroit Red Wings GM]

Fuck Bruins, lay off man.

Jesus Christ this is supposed to be for fun, if you don't want to read it, don't read it.

[annabelle]

lol

[jmcook]

thanks Corr I found it fun to read

[34lutzy - Former Hurricanes GM]

May 20, 2009 10:38:20 GMT -5 @annabelle said:

I think your "predictions" require a grammar check. All I'm saying is that it wasn't interesting because everything you brought up you just stated "no" to. And I'm not sure what kind of "points" I've proved for you as it's clear this article was pointless to read. Say something ballsy, like, "a team that finished in the bottom five last year will now be a playoff contender" or something interesting, not just "is this going to happen" followed by "no", too easy to say no, write something more interesting.

Don't complain about his grammar when you're wrong as well!

[34lutzy - Former Hurricanes GM]

^^^ That is almost as bad as me when "I was prod to present Magnus-Svesson Paajrvi to my Club"

[Detroit Red Wings GM]

Why did you highlight "proved"?

[Deleted]

lol thanks to everyone for their comments, And, why did you highlight proved?

[annabelle]

There's nothing wrong with "proved" in that sentence lol I now apologize to Calgary and will ridicule Detroit for a failed attempt.

[Detroit Red Wings GM]

Ridiculing Detroit is full of win, I approve.

[34lutzy - Former Hurricanes GM]

ah fuck i thought he put two "o's"